once upon the crest i stood and looked out to the west
the sun was shining in my eyes an then i faced the east
i saw a beast
i started to run away but something made me stop and stay
i hears a voice say
is it you? is it you? that standeth upon my mount
yes, tis me, i answered and trembled as i watched him approach
he had seven fingers on each hand with talons hard and sharp
off, off, off of my hill he said
wretched he was with a big intruding head
but my fears were at last allayed when i realized
it was only my cousin thurman.
2006-09-15 00:06:31 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
funny
2006-09-15 00:14:13 · answer #1 · answered by Katie N 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Interesting. The rythm is a little off, but is an interesting glimps into your mind...
2006-09-15 07:17:18 · answer #2 · answered by mamafence 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ur cousin has 14 finger
2006-09-15 07:14:17 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's good until the end...It needs a different ending...Something shocking!
2006-09-15 07:28:42 · answer #4 · answered by yourdayscoming 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its witty, and i like the slightly dark imagery. i like how it doesnt follow a formula like most poetry does.
2006-09-15 07:15:52 · answer #5 · answered by slippie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it has some problems with its rhythm but I like what you are trying to achieve
2006-09-15 07:13:12 · answer #6 · answered by badseamstress 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
someone should inform the writer that he has absolutely not talent in poetry
2006-09-15 07:16:03 · answer #7 · answered by dEUS 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
hey there, i find your poem very interesting! keep up the good work
2006-09-15 07:16:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The poem is meant for crazy people.........
2006-09-15 07:12:51 · answer #9 · answered by nathaniel b 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's crazily silly.
good work.
2006-09-15 07:10:36 · answer #10 · answered by DexterLoxley 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋