Am I Crazy?
Some say I'm psycho
some say I'm weird
It's like I'm a different person
and the old me just disappeared.
My heart is empty and
my soul torn apart
Lying there wondering,
Where I went wrong.
Calling out for you
Hoping to fix
What came un-glued?
Only to find no answer
Or what I could do.
My wounds run deep inside
there's blood all over the place
I think I've really lost it this time
I am ashamed to show my face
2006-09-14 13:26:23 · 5 answers · asked by YAHOO SUCKS ASS 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
i dont no y u call ur self luzr thats great a little deep but great u should become a pro. poet its awesome please right more poems they are just fantastic : }
2006-09-14 13:30:42 · answer #1 · answered by thinktinkgal 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it, Here's one:
Can you tell
it is a woman's heart --
the strength of the will
the sadness in the soul --
or is it only told
by the light
in her eyes?
She didn't know
the power that was in the darkness --
the earth
lost its strength
beneath their feet
and his breath
was caught by her eyes
as he looked again
at the past
and remembered
what love was.
2006-09-14 21:51:25 · answer #2 · answered by Ralph 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo! I happen to like it very much. Keep writing.
2006-09-14 20:32:05 · answer #3 · answered by Desi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it
2006-09-14 20:58:19 · answer #4 · answered by toobusy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YES.
2006-09-14 21:02:07 · answer #5 · answered by Baby_Apocalypse 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋