Love
Love is such a powerful word
a word people often misused
something token for granted
and something always abused.
Love is not something found
Or come a crossed
But something made,
Something created.
Love is always hated
And often debated
But forgotten,
And always lost.
Love is the greatest gift and
fate's cruelest curse
Because no one fights,
To make things better
But gives in and accepts the worst.
2006-09-14 13:07:37 · 11 answers · asked by YAHOO SUCKS ASS 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Not bad, Please understand that what one person finds good another may not. expressing yourself through Poetry is difficult enough. Don't subject yourself to undue criticism
some people think that there needs to be a rythm to poetry
others think freeverse sounds cool.
I prefer Haiku, highly structured and very short.
Write because you love to write and write about what you know.
We have all written about what Love is.
what about what love can become?
enjoy what you have Created for the sake of having created it.
others opinons really don't matter.
2006-09-14 13:22:19 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Cut out a few of the unnecessary words...here...
Love is a powerful word
A work often misused
Something taken for granted
Something always abused
It is not something made
Come across,
But something made
something created
Love is always hated
debated
and forgotten..
Always lost.
Love, the greatest gift.
Fate's cruelest curse
No one fights
to make things better
But gives in,
accepts the worst.
2006-09-14 15:16:11 · answer #2 · answered by tui 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-15 00:23:39 · answer #3 · answered by swett 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Let's say, that I could NEVER write something as outstanding as this! In the middle of the poem, I liked how you started twisting it up with some different words instead of the plain old boring rhyming. You know, the first sentence rhymes with the second sentence... yada yada yada. And your choice of words is beautiful, simply beautiful. Besides your few spelling errors, what can I say is bad about this poem? Nothing. It's perfect.
2006-09-14 13:18:04 · answer #4 · answered by Jell-O = ♥ 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's an interesting sentiment. I agree with the previous poster who said that it was "high-school-y."
It reads as very unsophisticated, but that's not necessarily bad. It is, however, at odds with your apparent purpose, which is to deliver an essential truth about love. The tone is sort of like Alexander Pope or someone, kind of trying to be epigrammatic -- but the lack of poise undermines the position of wisdom from which you are trying to appear to speak.
2006-09-15 09:07:50 · answer #5 · answered by Drew 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No payoff. Bad conclusion. After taking the time to read the whole poem defining love, I don't want to conclude that love makes things bad.
2006-09-14 13:17:17 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
thats acctually pretty good but not always true...
Love is always hated
And often debated
But forgotten,
And always lost.
thats the only part i don't agree with...
but over all is really good!
2006-09-16 10:44:11 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Has potential.
Your flow is off, slightly in the middle, and you seem to pushing for rhyme where it is unnecessary in the context of the work.
2006-09-14 13:10:47 · answer #8 · answered by The Doctor 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
A little high-school-y. Second line of second stanza---spelling error. 3rd line of 1st stanza - spelling error.
2006-09-14 13:17:57 · answer #9 · answered by P-nuts and Hair-dos 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Wow. I love the poem!
2006-09-14 13:15:06 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋