Nouthing Matters
Why does my heart Ache?
Is it the love I know we can make?
I wanna hear you breathe,right here next to me
But I a little girl lost,cant you see?
Please help me with my fears,
I want them to be gone,Will you Wisper words of wisdom in my ear?
Will you love me ever again,
Please dont make me cry,I cant take that again.
I sit here alone and wonder whats to come,
Please be mine becuase nouthing matters more to me then you.
I know I have a strange way of expressing myself to you
But,thats all I want to do, If we marry will you become tired of me?
or will we create our own family tree? Can we be at one with ourselves?
Or is out love strickly flase and nouthing else?
Does your heart ache like mine? Did you spend many lonely nights
sitting and crying? I know you've gotten over me,but cant we try to be
Something that we both know is stronger then you and me.
I wanna be in your embrace
I want to place my kisses around you in a trace
But the sad part is we have never met face 2 face.
2006-09-14 10:51:13 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Out of style, honey!
2006-09-14 10:52:19 · answer #1 · answered by Sally Pepsi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, you sound like a young hormonal girl, so your words make sense in that context. (Oh gawd, we can be soooooo serious and emotional!!!) Other than that, it sounds like you're writing about a movie star or some sort of crush? Don't stop writing though; it's good to get feelings out and someday ... who knows!
2006-09-14 11:01:46 · answer #2 · answered by CURIOUS 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is pretty good. is it true of something. like an incident of yours.
i think the very last line is a bit dumb
2006-09-14 10:53:49 · answer #3 · answered by Laela 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cool. didja write it? if ya did..Good JOB!!!!
2006-09-14 10:52:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey this poem isn't bad...it's okay..good work..
2006-09-14 10:57:32 · answer #5 · answered by abzoo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋