about cheggars ... yeah its very funny !!! why dont people just search your history instead of saying "not seen it"
2006-09-14 09:37:19
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answered by Anonymous
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hi Wurrble : ) nicely, it would not make you want to envision extra. If it really is your first financial disaster - and it style of appears like it really is, you want firstly the hero/heroine. who's e book (tale) is it? Zac's or Sarah's? who're we going to stick with even as they section? this is taken under consideration necessary on your 1st financial disaster to hook your readers. you want to get them all in favour of your hero's existence. a sturdy thanks to attempt it really is firstly a disaster that leads to a nasty decision on your hero's section OR a nasty decision that leads to a disaster. perhaps putting out your tale with the fireplace and the orphanage burning - or maybe slightly before that with the undesirable decision that starts off the fireplace??? yet this exciting initiate shall we your reader settle on to bypass on the shape at the same time with your hero and turn the web page to be sure what occurs next. it is a scene for the middle of your e book. Early on, you assert there is tight privateness above them from the timber' cover then that Zac can see the celebs - pick - is the sky open above or hidden by employing the treetops? Then there is what's referred to as an "information promote off" once you "tell" about the orphanage - you're desirous to "tell" us their history. we'd want to consistently get to entice close those characters little at a time - the picture of once you meet someone, you do not recognize all their history right away. this is sturdy that you would possibly want to draw close the characters' again thoughts, yet when there is part of it fairly pertinent to the tale, enable readers discover out because the tale unfolds - educate do not tell is something you'll listen plenty in case you would possibly want to come across a writers workshop to affix. I extraordinarily recommend that - examine on-line for writers communities on your section. advantages Grami
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answered by ? 4
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2006-09-14 09:40:17
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answered by Warlock 3
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Didn't see it!
2006-09-14 09:37:24
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answered by Anonymous
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nope. there is a possibility that it was removed. You would have gotten an email if it had. It happened to me last night. I would just reword it and repost.
2006-09-14 09:37:34
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answered by Anonymous
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I have no idea if it showed up. Maybe your question was too hard to answer.
2006-09-14 09:39:30
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answered by halfpint 3
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Naw, I just missed it I forgot it was on.
P.S. I looked at you 360 page to find it.
2006-09-14 09:36:37
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answered by Anonymous
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Yes, it showed up but made no sense so no one answered it.
2006-09-14 09:37:19
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answered by gettingmadtoday 5
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i did not see your question i hope you dont regret asking it like i regretted asking mine there are always a few smart alecs out there
2006-09-14 09:37:21
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answered by honiebyrd 4
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no - didn't see it
2006-09-14 09:35:28
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answered by Daddybear 7
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