I Just posted a fan fiction i wrote in my blog on my 360 i'd really appreciate some opinions before i write anymore
2006-09-14 04:49:10 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Sorry dude, read about four lines and gave up. That could be my fault though, I prefer graphic novels. I like the pretty pictures!
2006-09-14 04:59:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Okay, I will admit that I am not interested in that kind of fiction. But the stuff I read has lead me to believe that you are on the right track. You just need to find your niche. There are people that read that stuff and dig it, not me, though. You seem intelligent and creative...very important qualities for writing anything fiction. So, good luck. Don't give up!
2006-09-14 04:54:46 · answer #2 · answered by cheerstoyou 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Take it out of the first person as you have too many "I"s in it.
Tidy up the grammar, syntax and spelling.
It is readable but I would not bother. You tried to say too much too soon and all at once.
Sorry, but you did ask.
2006-09-14 04:56:37 · answer #3 · answered by Amanda K 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
OK had a look ,,,,,started to read and give up due to the font, drop the italics, its hard work to see, for me anyhow,,
Sorry but you asked,,
2006-09-14 04:55:07 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you related to Jack Osbourne?
2006-09-14 04:55:24 · answer #5 · answered by gerbiltamer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
PMSL at him up there.. his answer is funny
2006-09-14 04:54:20 · answer #6 · answered by confused 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hurt my eyes readin it....sorry
2006-09-14 05:15:39 · answer #7 · answered by mishnbong 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋