He participated in the trainings and conferences organised by the Ministry of Health, the Office for Registration of Medical Products, Medical Devices and Biocides, by the Main Pharmaceutical Inspectorate and the Health Care Policy Institute (attached to the Medical University in Łódź).
He is a member of the Polish Pharmaceutical Society (since 1986), of the Society for Good Clinical Practice in Poland and a co-organiser of some all-Poland scientific conferences.
He is also a member of the International Health Economics Association (iHEA) and took an active part in the jobs of the 5th International Congress in 2005.
He is the author of two publications about pharmaeconomics published in the magazines which are a force to be reckoned with scientific environment.
2006-09-14 01:37:19 · 8 answers · asked by AsMa 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
It's almost perfect. Here are some small but necessary changes.
1) He participated in training and conferences organised....
2) the Ministry of Health; by the Office for Registration. of Medical Products, Medical Devices and Biocides; by the Main Pharmaceutical Inspectorate and by the Health Care Policy Institute...
3) took an active part in the tasks of the Fifth International...
4) author of two articles on pharmaeconomics, which appeared in major scientific journals.
2006-09-14 20:08:23 · answer #1 · answered by X 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He who? Too many He's!
1st paragraph is fine as long as you use a name instead of "he".
2nd paragraph:
A member of the blah blah blah, John Doe took an active part in the jobs.......
3rd:
Mr. Doe is the author of two pub blah blah blah published in well respected magazines in the scientific environment.
3 needs some more work, but overall you did well.
Good luck
2006-09-14 08:52:14 · answer #2 · answered by mickeyg1958 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is your last paragraph, as you deal with opinion
"He is the author of two articles about pharmaeconomics, published in "Better Drugs Journal" and "Pharmaeconomics Today", "'Drugs and Money' and "Do You Get What You Pay For?"
2006-09-14 08:42:28 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay, he who?
(name)has participated in the training and confereces...
He is an established member of: the P.P.S(1986); and put the rest in. ALSO. NEVER USE ABR.
It is generally quite good. but it needs to come of the page and you need to be more dramitc in your wriiting.
2006-09-15 13:51:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
comma after magazine in your last sentence. organize is spelled wrong..
"which are to be reckoned with scientific environment" I would put ..
"with, in the scientific environment"
EDIT: also, use his name more. 'He' is repeated a lot.
2006-09-14 08:49:08 · answer #5 · answered by psychstudent 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you can write such good english why should i have to look for mistakes?I'm English and can't find anything wrong with your statement
2006-09-14 08:43:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can't be bothered
2006-09-14 08:38:27 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
what's the point it's all garbage
2006-09-14 08:45:10 · answer #8 · answered by Leah nora 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋