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I know my english and grammar suck, but I still like to write. Here's two different plot:

One about a young guy who was born in a middle east country but got adopted by a greek/rome military of high rank. Later he fell in love with princess of a middle east country and have great relationship with the country. Once her father pass away, her uncle took over, killed every family members and blocked all trades between rest of the world and rome/greece. So the young guy was sent in as a spy to investage out who's in charge only to find out that his former lover is still alive. In end he would kill both his lover and her uncle.

Or

A young american who was traveling in Europe end up got forced into becoming a assassin. At first he absolutely hate the job. Later he would learn to like what he's doing since he basically help stop human trafficking. As the story go along, one of the main villian would trick him into believing that he actually work for the villian. This lead him

2006-09-13 20:34:04 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

him to assassin his own boss whom he has never met. Once he did, he found out that he killed the wrong person and manage to assassin the villian. At the end he would realize that with his boss gone, he's now responsible to stop even more human trafficking. This wasn't easy on him at all so he had to make a choice between go home and live in misery or he can put himself in even more risk and hope to stop them.

2006-09-13 20:37:37 · update #1

2 answers

I like them both. But they are totally different stories. You have a great
imagination for writing, use it. When ur ready to find a Literary Agent give me
hollar, I'll give u more info. Really good plots and twists !! That is exactly
what publishers are looking for right now. They eat it up !

2006-09-13 20:43:24 · answer #1 · answered by CraZyCaT 5 · 0 0

I think number 2 has more potential being probably a ittle closer 2 our time. but you have to think it through really carefully how duz he get mixed up wid these people why is he in Europe etc. etc.
WAY TO GO WHATEVER YOU CHOOSE AND DON'T LET YOUR TALENT GO TO WASTE!!!!!!!!

2006-09-13 20:57:41 · answer #2 · answered by Elyon Black 1 · 0 0

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