When I wrote this, I didn't really have a theme in mind. It was just free association. That makes coming up with a title extra tough for me. Anyway, here goes.
Burgeoning internet addict
Intercept savage thoughts easily
Epiphanies teasing me
With glimpses of what could really be
Evenly ain’t the way of the universe
No reimbursement
What I see are curses
And blessings are ours to make
Life in large part is fate
But not the divine kind
Just the equation of life
A brilliant but blind rhyme
I need to find time
My oasis from strife
Only my mind cries
My heart’s climate is too arid
Had 1.25 out of 2 parents
Look at them and think
The two of them in marriage
A born to lose deal
If you spill
I will care about how you feel
The amygdala will make you love
And also make you kill
You create it as you make it up
And then must wait until
The results come back one day
We’re waiting still
2006-09-13 18:29:35 · 12 answers · asked by Subconsciousless 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
For some reason, as I read it, the thought 'random access' came to mind....
It is a challenge to follow, because you must read each thought 'as is'.....which I think is a good thing.
Clever.
2006-09-14 03:35:21 · answer #1 · answered by JC 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Humble Welders for call, stated by ability of ...they huddle...tightly pressed... to weld mutually their souls... one evidence advice: third section, 8th line s/b spelled 'off' 2 evidence advice: yet with poetry there is alot of 'provide' so it ought to or might not be suitable --- third section starts off with God's potent Hand crumplED then God saveS people who... HAD... that final quite might merely be author's determination or there may be a grammatical shift that's greater edifying --- or edified greater greater valuable (lol) 2 patties, tomato, no bread, is that still a burger?
2016-10-14 23:47:53 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem sounds like just what you called it,free association.sounds like you got a lot of thoughts in your brain.it also sounds like a quest for understanding,or purpose.call it "life goes on"cause in spite of the good thoughts or the bad thoughts...life goes on regardless.
2006-09-13 19:14:42 · answer #3 · answered by stoneripple 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LIFE came to mind.
2006-09-14 22:35:36 · answer #4 · answered by mumtaz 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you wrote a lot of words, but you're saying nothing.
2006-09-13 18:41:38 · answer #5 · answered by slyfox 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
what about Internet addict.Keep it up the good work.
2006-09-13 18:39:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Nice!!
2006-09-13 18:38:10 · answer #7 · answered by Cristy A 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i have no clue what to call it but maybe : drug rehab on the horizon.
2006-09-13 18:32:29 · answer #8 · answered by robyn 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yeh real neat call it crap
2006-09-13 18:31:16 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
"Tender Recluse v1.1"?
Love it
2006-09-13 18:37:46 · answer #10 · answered by Luke Lombard 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋