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My observation is about human's behavior towards attractive and less attractive women. My hypothesis is that if my friend sees or talks to attractive girl in our school then his reaction and tone of his voice will change as he talks to that attractive girl. I came up with this hypothesis because it is common in our society that people intend to look attractive as himself to a women who he is attracted by. Cafeteria is one of the appealing settings where everyone comes around and enjoys themselves among there friends. Here you may see girls and boys behave each other as they talk to them. You may see a guy act tough as he talks to attractive girls.
2006-09-13 16:14:36 · 6 answers · asked by Chae-hee S 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
So what exactly is your question?
2006-09-13 16:22:10 · answer #1 · answered by Island Queen 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Assuming you want this paragraph edited for grammar, etc.?
My...women. My hypothesis is (take out "that") if...talks to AN attractive...school, then his reaction and voice tone will change. I...society for people to want to look attractive to people they are attracted to. The cafeteria is an appealing setting for visiting among friends. Here you can witness males and females interacting with each other. A male may act more macho in the sight of an attractive girl.
2006-09-13 16:31:41 · answer #2 · answered by poolsharkette 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your hypothesis is mostly correct. Humans, contrary to many beliefs are actually pack animals just dogs and wolves, ducks, and various other animals. Humans find a way of.... well..... fitting in to their surroundings. If this situation means being tough well,, then they are tough. If it means being keen and sensative, then they are keen and sensative. When it comes to women, men have a tendency, again just like animals, to advertise their status. Muscular guys tend to flaunt their muscles for woman while smart guys try to talk interesting conversations. The downfall, however, is that not all women are interested in muscles and some don't want to have interesting conversations. What differs between our pack status and wildlife status is that we are raised in different societies throughout our lives. Some people are spoiled while other work hard everyday. These changes in societies or structures help to determine what we find and don't find attractive.
2006-09-13 16:29:24 · answer #3 · answered by vail2073 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have noticed that humans by nature always change the way they act, and talk when they are around someone from the opposite sex who is attractive to them. For example: In a school Cafeteria a young male would suddenly act tough in front of a girl he feels is pretty, it is so plain to see as a witness by his side.
Same with the girls, you will suddenly see them fix their hair and flutter their eyelashes and smile.
2006-09-13 16:22:52 · answer #4 · answered by Jas 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well I suggest you start with a punch line. Something along the lines of the art of picking up beautiful women or something like that. The end of your first paragraph should be your thesis statement. You should not refer to your thesis in the paper. And then you can further introduce the topic in paragraph 2 and what your variables are. Good Luck!
2006-09-13 16:25:16 · answer #5 · answered by Natasha B 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds familiar - my co worker is the same way. just today we had a new girl that he trained and oh my goodness, i never see a diffrent kind of attitude in him since i worked in that department. his voice changed and his moves and he appears pale.
what's going on?
What was your question again?
2006-09-13 16:29:16 · answer #6 · answered by Friv 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋