Let me know what you think...
I need some time away from my memories
To gain the strength to pull through this tragedy
How have I come this far, and never known
I swallow these pills as another means of remedy
I can already see that tomorrow is a waste
I live my life on the road, not at the same pace
Of everyone else, I’ve grown so envious
Why do I continue living this destructive way
As I look back, I realize my dream was a mistake
I’ve fought for years to gain my own place
A spot in the sun that shines only for me
All that’s left is to leave without a single trace
Trying to gain control of this pure chaos
I seem to find myself alone and lost
What can I do to fix this catastrophe
This is my life, and I accept that this is how it has to be
2006-09-13 15:02:00 · 5 answers · asked by youdontneedtoknowme 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
As I said on your other posting it's great. Did you notice if you write anything insightful every other person at Answers thinks you are depressed and need help. Sometimes people just need to express themselves. You can tell we live in a magic pill society.
2006-09-13 15:10:33 · answer #1 · answered by CuervoBMed 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The poem is so intense I almost luv it but the ending is such a disappointment I expected a big " the Hell with it all, I'm Alive N I'm gonna do it 4 me" at he end. Suicide, 2 me, is just the doing of a person 2 coward to weak 2 live if this poem is Ur thought please reconsider I believe every1 is worth knowing and life is worth having after all, life is not easy or good it's life.
2006-09-13 15:16:15 · answer #2 · answered by Nitemuse 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have a way with words, your syntax is nice. I think everyone has felt this way some time in their life. God bless you, good luck, be positive, your place in the sun is just around the corner.
2006-09-13 15:09:19 · answer #3 · answered by Skanky McSkankypants 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its very good..except i dont rly like the the flow..it doesnt flow too well..like when i was reading it, it kinda didnt sound right
2006-09-13 15:17:44 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please don't quit...tomorrow is not a waste (even if it IS a pain...).
Hang in there!
2006-09-13 15:09:33 · answer #5 · answered by blktiger@pacbell.net 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋