Can someone please help me rewrite this into a poem, as My boyfriend said some horrible things to me last night, and I think a short poem will get the point across, Unfortunetly i dont know how to write poetry.. This is the points I want to get across to him, can you help. here it is.
You said some horrible things to me last night,
It makes me wonder why you are with me.
You say you love me, but in the same sentence say you don’t like the person I have become?
You said If you had known I would be like this when you met me, you wouldn’t be with me but its too late because you love me.. How do you think that made me feel.
I try to help you out of love, and you throw it back in my face and say Im trying to buy your love..
You need to have a good think if You really want to be with me. If you do, you need to learn to give me more respect. and not say so many horrible things and hanging up on my phone calls.
2006-09-13 13:42:33 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
I don't think that poems are a good idea for such situations and probably you have broken up already but...
"You said you wouldn't want me
the way I have become
So as you wish will be
consider me long gone."
2006-09-17 12:32:47 · answer #1 · answered by Divra 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry is not a good way to communicate with a man
2006-09-13 13:51:42 · answer #2 · answered by » mickdotcom « 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
poetry, is freeflowing and rarely makes an expression its sharp point, but i think you are special, so here's one: "F*ck You!"
2006-09-13 13:45:34 · answer #3 · answered by Eryc 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋