1.My task now is to make a plan for manpower so that we can meet our production target .
2.My task now is to make a plan for manpower to meet our production target .
2006-09-13 11:19:04 · 22 answers · asked by playboyjz 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
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2006-09-13 11:20:27 · answer #1 · answered by drgn0016 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-09-13 11:27:53 · answer #2 · answered by brownshuga91 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-09-13 11:26:23 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-09-13 11:20:53 · answer #4 · answered by GoWhitey33 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is it your plan to estimate manpower NUMBERS necessary to meet your target and hire accordingly? Or is EXISTING manpower waiting on your plan to implement in order to meet the target?
If yr forecasting need for manpower, 1. If manpower is waiting on yr plan to go ahead with production, 2.
As you see, 2 can vaguely mean both and is not as clear as it could be.
2006-09-13 11:29:37 · answer #5 · answered by voiceoverman 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In sentence 2, the phrase to meet our production target modifies manpower instead of the intended we.
2006-09-13 11:31:16 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
#1, i think it needs a comma after "now". neither version is abysmal tho ;)
My task now, is to make a plan for manpower so that we can meet our production target.
I think it may be better to say...
My current task is to make a plan for manpower so that we can meet our production target.
2006-09-13 11:22:19 · answer #7 · answered by Eos 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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#2 implies that manpower will meet the production target.
FP
2006-09-13 11:27:18 · answer #8 · answered by F. Perdurabo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They are both awkward. How about "I'm planning our manpower needs to meet the prodution target."
2006-09-13 11:26:24 · answer #9 · answered by KM 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First one
2006-09-13 11:21:02 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋