this is "Allteration Poem" can you guys read mine and fix whatever it needs to be fixed please thank you.
President is brilliant
He resists the recessive
Recently, the president
concealed the resilience of U.S
He has resolved
bewilderment of concealment
President is residence of U.S
We need brilliant president
Like plants need sun
Therefore, president is like a sun
President is also like a tiger, the leader
it may not make sense but thanks for helping me
2006-09-12 14:24:27 · 4 answers · asked by huichongkim61 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
This poem is awful. I'm honestly saying this to be constructive. Its pretty brutal and doesnt make much sense. "The president concealed the resilience of US"? So the president hid the resilience of the US? Sorry, but I don't even really know where to begin.
2006-09-12 14:27:32 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The president is brilliant
Resisting the recession
Recently, the president
concealed the resilience
of the U.S. of A
Bewilderment, concealment
The president is resident
In the U.S. of A
Our brilliant president
Your plants need sun
Our president's a tiger
A leader, the one
2006-09-12 21:30:36 · answer #2 · answered by Bethany 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
President is brilliant
I am a libtard
All I do is piss, moan, complain
President is brilliant
2006-09-12 21:32:48 · answer #3 · answered by mdigitale 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
get a room
2006-09-12 21:27:06 · answer #4 · answered by Bobet 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋