1980
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Under the moon
I long for you!
1990
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Let's go to bed,
Oh, yeah, I love you.
2000
The roses are plucked
The violets are bruised
Everyone's getting ******
And we're all so confused
lol
2006-09-12 05:22:35 · 11 answers · asked by sugga_babe_79 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
In all seriousness, I like the transition between timelines, but the 2000 edition was by far the most original. If only you could think of something other than roses are red, violets are blue. Just a suggestion.
2006-09-12 05:25:21 · answer #1 · answered by jennybeanses 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Well, it's the best I've seen on Yahoo yet, but given the standards of the usual suspects, that's not difficult to achieve.
I like it. Kinda Dorothy Parker. If you haven't read her, find a book of her work; I think you will really like it, and saying you like Dorothy Parker also makes you sound pretty bright because she's very popular among the intelligentsia.
2006-09-13 01:43:36 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job. These are not good parodies at all. Anyone can use the "F" word. That's easy. Good poetry is not so easy. Get over trite and try for original.
2006-09-12 14:02:32 · answer #3 · answered by Teacher 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
IT STARTED OUT GOOD, BUT WHEN YOU GOT TO 2000 YOU NEED TO CHANGE IT IT'S VERY OFFENSIVE.
2006-09-12 12:29:54 · answer #4 · answered by tinkerbell 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i sincerely hope this isn't a timeline of your relationship
2006-09-12 20:13:16 · answer #5 · answered by quinndarling2000 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats pretty good!!
2006-09-12 12:28:36 · answer #6 · answered by TroubleRose 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice...LOL
2006-09-12 12:28:03 · answer #7 · answered by Ali Z 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
excellent, time is changing
2006-09-12 12:59:06 · answer #8 · answered by Smiley 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
goodness..
2006-09-12 12:28:20 · answer #9 · answered by Mz J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no idea
2006-09-12 12:27:47 · answer #10 · answered by md m 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋