I am not that good with english and my site is very important to me... and i was wondering if you would be the one that could help me couple of contents just to change or add whatever u would like to........
check my site at http://ilovetoargue.com
email me at phpraja@mchsi.com with subject ENGLISH HELP... thank youuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-09-08 17:16:04 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Teaching
Hi, I'm not a pro, but hope this helps...I copied and pasted some of your stuff on the home page and this is what I came up with...
I added News Feed's link! The link checks for top news on Google, news, finances, and the general internet, every hour or less. Let me know what you would recommend for the news category. Click on the link: Contact Us
We just added a new Link called MyPage. Now you will be able to create your own profile page, BUT this is only for registered members.
Latest update: I added 2 new polls which are more of a political viewpoint . I am going to create more polls with different categories for example: technology, cars, gas?, etc.
Also, keep in mind, that the best web pages are short and sweet--rather blunt in their speech...no extra jazz, that makes it sound like you personally--people from all walks of life are on the net and each one needs to understand what you are saying, (unless you only want people like you to understand it)...
Anyway, everyone who reads it, needs to comprehend it and to be quite honest, I wasn't comprehending some of what you wrote. I don't say that to offend but rather to encourage you to improve on what you already have going there! I only *wish* I could do what you did there in building a web site!
2006-09-08 17:36:09 · answer #1 · answered by Becca 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am an English Major. I found plenty of errors. Email me and I will help you out.
2006-09-08 19:17:45 · answer #2 · answered by Miss. Tee98 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It needs a lot of work. It would be best to pay someone to proofread your site.
2006-09-08 17:23:43 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why not ask your members to add corrections in a postscript?
2006-09-09 11:08:32 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
man! if i want to argue, should i go there? OK,, i do not English that well,, all i know is that maybe you should offer JAMAICAN RUM, and CUBAN CIGARS,, and the ability to send FIDEL CASTRO SMOKE SIGNALS FOR HELP.. for ENGLISH ,, HE could help..
2006-09-08 17:28:33 · answer #5 · answered by litehmusicdj 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
well your english seems fine to me!so what english words do you need help with that will help me help you kk!
*Kirsten*
2006-09-08 17:19:53 · answer #6 · answered by Hello! :) 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just try your best all the time, trust yourself, if u really need help welcome to ask all the time and teacher is the best to ask.
2006-09-08 21:31:40 · answer #7 · answered by KAREN 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah man u have a lot of mistakes there
2006-09-08 20:10:12 · answer #8 · answered by jjj 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ur web site is so boring
2006-09-08 17:18:33 · answer #9 · answered by Minnalgal 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
People get paid for that.
2006-09-08 17:18:50 · answer #10 · answered by Scott B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋