ok, i am trying to write an essay so i can get money for college. i am in 9th grade and this is what they want me to write about:
"why i am deserving deserving of the scholarship."
PLEASE HELP!! i know, that to you, this essay would be easy to write, but i need tome tips and adivce on how to write a good one so i can win.
THANK YOU IN ADVANCE
i need the money to pay for college more than anything...
2006-09-08 14:27:23 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Other - Social Science
~How about this:
"I deserve not only to attend college but I deserve to attend free of charge because I refused to be bothered by writing your lame essay and I got some complete stranger (unknown to either you or me) to do it for me. I was neither smart enough or ambitious enough to do it myself, and isn't that just the kind of student you want to blow your scholarship funds on rather than some nerd who actually does his own work (what a fool)? Anyway, I need the bread and you should give it to me just because I want it."
2006-09-08 14:45:58 · answer #1 · answered by Oscar Himpflewitz 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Show that, having the opportunity to go to college, the knowledge you gain will help you to make the world a better place to live - if do not know what you want to do in life - be a doctor, a lawyer, an astronaut, a scientist or what, but one person CAN change the entire world... The money they "give" will multiply to benefit future generations...
2006-09-08 14:35:42 · answer #2 · answered by outgoingtraffic 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ASK YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMILY WHAT THEY LIKE ABOUT YOU...IF THEY R HAVING A HARD TIME WITH THIS QUESTION-START DOING FOR OTHERS-RELATE THIS INFO WITH WHAT U WANT TO MAJOR IN COLLEGE. THAAT WILL ANS. THE QUESTION WHY U DESERVE THE SCHOLARSHIP
2006-09-08 14:38:08 · answer #3 · answered by 1leapinglizard 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are not deserving if you can't even write an essay
2006-09-11 04:44:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
make a list of all the things you like about yourself and go from there!
2006-09-08 14:31:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋