My story is about orphans that nearly escape a certain death. Soon Peter Pan ( this is a sequel to Peter Pan ) rescues them and brings them to his island.
Hook traps them in a cave and an epic battle goes on. Why has he brought them here? Who is that second person behind the mask?
Roxy and Xena use their Reality Bending skills to fight the piratical fiend.
Pick a name but don't say anything about the story plz:
a. I win, You Lose
b. Potential Danger
c. Thoughts of Safety
2006-09-08 11:29:15 · 17 answers · asked by LizziFishie 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
I like your story but the title I don't. If I have to pick I would pick I win, you lose. Titles are suppose to bring attention to the book. If I read those titles I would never dream that was a peter pan story. Try Peter Pan and the orphan or whisk away to neverland. You just need a new title... Good luck
2006-09-08 11:43:44 · answer #1 · answered by Kurra 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Peter Pandemic
2006-09-08 11:30:59 · answer #2 · answered by ndtaya 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like A and B best. C doesnt really represent/summarize the plot of the story it seems.
2006-09-10 09:35:43 · answer #3 · answered by black_d0ll 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought there was already a sequel...uhhh I dont really like none of the titles. oh well good luck!!! <3
2006-09-08 11:31:35 · answer #4 · answered by daf-en-nee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
b. Potential Danger
2006-09-08 11:30:43 · answer #5 · answered by pro_choice_my_right 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
C
I am sorry to talk about the story, but I am very curious:
Have you put it on fanfiction.com? Its a good idea for feedback....
2006-09-08 11:31:32 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about, "I win Danger"
~or~ "You Lose Safety"
~or~ "Potential Thoughts"
~or~ "You Lose Potential Thoughts"
~or~ "I Win Safety"
~or~ "You Lose Thoughts" :-D
2006-09-08 11:33:18 · answer #7 · answered by sweetpea 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like : b. because it doesn't give away any parts of the story.
2006-09-08 11:35:49 · answer #8 · answered by Laz♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Psyche ward?
2006-09-08 11:30:40 · answer #9 · answered by stuffy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
B.
That was a great summary of your story!
2006-09-08 11:46:55 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋