I just wrote this, but I don't know what to add in the last line:
No time,
no space,
all is frozen,
since I saw your face.
The memory of your skin,
is taking over my body,
the desire of the sweetest sin,
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I am stuck, I need something for the last line so I can continue.
2006-09-08 07:13:11 · 3 answers · asked by Another Face Of Me 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
It's hard to find a good word that fits with your poem that rhymes with body. How about changing it to the memory of your skin is taking over my MIND, instead of body and then find a word that rhymes with mind and use your own words for the last line instead of someone elses.
2006-09-08 07:19:50 · answer #1 · answered by T J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My heart has opened to you and you are welcomed in.
Or if it needs to (sorta) rhyme with body:
I wrote you this poem to let you know that I think you're a really hotty.
2006-09-08 14:20:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are such a hottie. Is floating in my head like I am a nobody.
2006-09-08 14:25:31 · answer #3 · answered by hello 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋