Tiltle: Off The Pitch
genre: Crime, gangster, violence, drama, romance
main characters:
Fillipo-football player-26 years of age
Girgio-godfather-mafia boss-56 years of age
Doni-referre-35 years of age
Fabio-mafia member-28 years of age
Raul-mafia member/ physical trainer-64 years of age
Laura-collrge professor-27 years of age
Ricardo-football player-25 years of age
Tino-mafia member-45 years of age
Gabi-23-student
the story is about match fixing in the country of Holland where
a mafia family tend to do business.
when 2 players get involved in it. it soon becomes the beginning of a road of blood shed. Ahed of the road the 2 players amy find love, happiness and heartbrakes.
2006-09-08 04:32:39 · 7 answers · asked by garnessilva 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
This one could be a 10 done right. But it would all depend on the writing.
2006-09-08 07:39:55 · answer #1 · answered by sp_isme 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's hard to rate a story just based on a summary like that. One hundred people could use the exact same plot, but they would write 100 different stories. Style, dialogue, characterization, plot development-- these are the things that make the story.
If this is a story that you want to write, then go ahead and try! It doesn't matter what other people think. If it's an idea you are passionate about, then that excitedness will come out in your writing.
2006-09-08 11:42:36 · answer #2 · answered by Obi_San 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
3, Sounds like it's not my kind of story. I like Mafia stories, but the Holland things is boring to me.
2006-09-08 11:38:21 · answer #3 · answered by Ricky 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
3 at the best
2006-09-08 11:38:53 · answer #4 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a very common story. rated 1.
2006-09-08 11:39:33 · answer #5 · answered by johnmonroe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would watch it.
6-7 if well done (million dollar budget)
2006-09-08 11:41:43 · answer #6 · answered by Scooby 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ZERO
2006-09-08 11:35:08 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋