so i'm not good enough to be your wife,
but you'll play house all day.
i ain't playin' that ****, so i guess that i can't stay.
later babe, hope you find tht perfect girl someday.
you don't need me
i see you've got it figured out.
your way or the highway, that 's what your all about.
i thought you were the only one , who understood me
but after all this time, you still fail to see.
i should go now, before someone ends up sad.
and come to the acceptance that sometimes Love is bad.
someone's gonna have a broken heart,
that i know for sure
but i can't go on forever just being your girl.
boy i love you so much, and i know i always will
but i can't be just your girlfriend and this is how i feel.
all these years i have tried to prove that i'll stay right by your side,
but i can't stay with someone who won't make me their wife.
this is the only way
i must say goodbye
i expect a 1000 lonely nights,
i know that i will cry'
but i believe in love and i know i'll be alright.
this is for the best, even though it hurts so bad
and i don't want to force you into doing something that would make you sad.
goodbye my love
have a happy life
i hope that you cry too for a 1000 lonely nights.
written by me. i have the copyrights
2006-09-07 03:52:34 · 20 answers · asked by Pussycat 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
wow, you sure do have talent i would give you that, i mean personally I'm not very good at writing a poem and i really admire when people like you has lot to say on their poetic voice, keep it up...really nice
2006-09-07 05:41:09 · answer #1 · answered by Jubei 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋
It's alright, but it needs shortening I think, to be more powerful. Now, it's more like an R&B lyric. Not my style, and not as good as a Erykah Badu song - but with a little work you could go a long way.
2006-09-07 11:03:53 · answer #2 · answered by McAtterie 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not really. But poetry is always a good way to express yourself. As long as you like it and feel better about writing it, it's all great. You don't have to please anyone but yourself. That should be the motto of any artist.
2006-09-07 10:57:07 · answer #3 · answered by Ricardo P 3 · 4⤊ 1⤋
It's ok but on another note maybe you should try not playing house first
2006-09-07 10:56:23 · answer #4 · answered by dumpllin 5 · 2⤊ 2⤋
copyrights? - nobody wants that - you just wasted 2 minutes of my life
2006-09-07 10:58:34 · answer #5 · answered by ♥michele♥ 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
BIG FAT UGLY WASTE OF MY TIME.....YOU SOUND LIKE SUCH A LOSER!!THANKS FOR THE 2 POINTS THAT'S THE LEAST YOU CAN DO FOR WASTING MY 2 MINS.
2006-09-07 11:03:16 · answer #6 · answered by Wendel T 1 · 3⤊ 1⤋
interesting
2006-09-07 10:55:00 · answer #7 · answered by cute sam 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's okay, it doesn't rhyme a whole lot but it's okay.
2006-09-07 10:56:25 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
now that is a great poem. It also states that this is like a goodbye letter.
2006-09-07 10:58:28 · answer #9 · answered by lover_jessie05 2 · 1⤊ 3⤋
that is a fantastic poem that i am sure a lot of people can relate to. good job
2006-09-07 10:55:38 · answer #10 · answered by always thinkin 5 · 2⤊ 3⤋