Things I Love About You
Your eyes
which first held me captivated
where I stood.
Your smile
to dazzle the sun
and warm every corner of my soul.
Your voice
like a sparkling mountain stream
which flows into my heart.
Your walk
and the way your gracefulness
takes my breath away.
Your hair
about which I dreamed
cascading into my face
as you leaned over me.
Your hands
whose caress I crave
to hold my face
in their tenderness.
Your arms
I long to have around my neck
as you pull me close
to your warmth.
Most of all
everything you are
changed the way I feel about my life.
I love you.
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what do u think.......is it nice?
2006-09-06 09:35:38 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Very, Very GOOD! I can only assume that you have written this about someone very special to you. What a wonderful surprise, it will be enjoyed.
2006-09-06 10:21:29 · answer #1 · answered by Plain Jane 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It was very good- but, by the way, you cannot have that published now. It has been opened to the public and that takes away rights a publisher would want. I strongly reccomend not doin this in the future. Instead, submit to a contest or something. Sorry to be annoying
2006-09-06 17:16:07 · answer #2 · answered by Ari 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love you too
2006-09-06 16:45:01 · answer #3 · answered by jayesh108 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow,it's really nice.
2006-09-06 20:12:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
YES, IT'S VERY NICE. YOU HAVE A SPECIAL TALENT.
2006-09-06 16:47:53 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
WOW
2006-09-06 16:47:52 · answer #6 · answered by hillbilly 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it wuz touching:)
2006-09-06 16:41:16 · answer #7 · answered by Big Red 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋