Do you like my poem? Just say what you feel?

Question

I look back on your life and say
This world was meant for you,
I see your face, I see your fans,
I see the minds you blew.

I see your love, I see your thrill,
I see the joy you spread.
The danger that was told to you,
Went right over your head.

The sickness that you had to face,
The hatred that you saw,
It wasn't long till all that darkness,
came knocking on your door.

You lived your days like each was your last,
And life was just a ride,
You were born, for this world,
And not the sh*t inside.

Answer 1

A little unpolished on the whole.
Unrefined.
The last line threw the aesthetic feel of poetry right out of the window.

Answer 2

I might replace the second to last word with stuff instead, but otherwise, it was a wonderful poem. Keep up the good work. Very deep and I liked it.

Answer 3

I think it is a pretty good poem. Except for the last part. How about " now time has come to say good bye, but time has come much too fast".

Answer 4

It was good until the end. My favorite was the first 4 lines.

Answer 5

good with a B+ i'll give, it has words but miss some correspondence rhyme in it, and poem should be more sentimental and less sarcasticism.

Answer 6

i like yo poem it's cool

Answer 7

sucks, but at least you had the balls to ask.

Answer 8

such is life

Answer 9

i feel..................... nothing