to my secret velintine
from your only sunshine
I should have love you more in time
but instead i drank summer wine gasping at the sunshine
i clambed a masculine pine
and from it i drink its posion turpentine
then i dreamed of you
you were mine and covered in vine
on top of are pine and we were
making love in the devine sunshine
what dose everyone thing how can i make it better is it in a poem form any idea's
2006-09-06 04:09:11 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
yes i love this poem.............it is sooooooooo romantic.
2006-09-06 04:13:21 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Good poem, man.
Keep doing what your doing.
2006-09-06 11:22:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This one is good too... Dont change a thing keep it up your doing good!!!!
2006-09-06 11:14:33 · answer #3 · answered by brutalA 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poem is great. really awesome
2006-09-06 11:11:32 · answer #4 · answered by mommie2be 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋