Can you please check the grammer and spelling of this poem for me?
Ella arrastra en la cocina
Está preparando atacar.
Es atenta y está concentriendo.
Sus oídos están escuchando,
Sus ojos están buscando,
Y su nariz está oliendo.
Sus patas salien del suelo;
La gatilla salta.
Also, if you can come up with a good title, please let me know.
Thank You :)
2006-09-05 15:53:57 · 8 answers · asked by ? 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Ella SE arastra por la cocina
SE está preparando para atacar
Es atenta y está concentrada
Sus oídos están escuchando, - great
Sus ojos están buscando, - great
Y su nariz está oliendo. - great
Sus patas SE DESPEGAN del suelo
La gatilla salta - You can say "Gatita" too.
(My corrections are in CAPS)
A good title could be:
"La presa" (The prey)
"Cazando" (Hunting)
"La gatita" (The kitten)
2006-09-05 16:08:18 · answer #1 · answered by eomga 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ella arrastra en la cocina
Está preparando atacar.
Es atenta y está consintiendo
Sus oídos están escuchando,
Sus ojos están buscando,
Y su nariz está oliendo.
Sus patas salen del suelo;
La gatilla salta.
La gatilla
2006-09-05 15:57:09 · answer #2 · answered by evangelionDude 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Ella se arrastra en la cocina
Se esta preparando para atacar
Esta atenta y esta consintiendo
Sus oídos están escuchando,
Sus ojos están buscando,
Y su nariz esta oliendo
Sus patas salen del suelo:
La gallina salta
:-)
2006-09-05 15:56:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-09-30 09:28:14 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
concentrAndo
sus patas salEn
good job!
A title like el gato would totally give it away... El ataque? maybe...
2006-09-05 15:55:48 · answer #5 · answered by Melanie L 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
How about "Gatos feroces"
Your poem looked well formed.
2006-09-05 16:00:58 · answer #6 · answered by Pete 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sorry, can't give you title, but sounds ok to me
2006-09-05 15:56:40 · answer #7 · answered by ceogero 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
No.
2006-09-05 15:59:16 · answer #8 · answered by da_hammerhead 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋