I need help writing a paragraph...?

Question

Its for light brigade im suppose to explain why i want to join it ( for those of you who dont know light brigade is prevention of drugs and alchol in schools)

ok thanx for everyones help i have now made a paragraph i believe to be acceptable enough thanx bunches

Answer 1

have you gone through this i mean any one you know that uses
if so you can use them as a means to explain why you want to join you don't need names just the experience of what you may or may not have went through and that you want to stop others from using or going through it

Answer 2

I___________ Don't Like The Prevention Of Drugs In Alchol In Schools Because I Don't Think It Is Right For My Peers To Come Into School Like That Also If The World Was Drug Free There World Be No Troubles In The World.

I HOPE THAT HELPS!

Answer 3

Let's assume for the time being that you really do want to join the organization. If you don't, you're going to have a lousy paragraph, so find some enthusiasm -- find a reason, if you don't have one already. Next, try freewriting about that reason: Grab a piece of paper and simply fill it up with whatever comes to mind on the topic. Don't worry about grammar, since you're not going to turn this part in.

Your whole goal is just to find out what's in your head and put it down on paper where you can see it and study it.

Once you're done, go through and highlight the sentences or partial thoughts that best capture your motivations. Pick one sentence or phrase in particular.

Now, do it again, starting with that sentence or phrase. Build on it for another sheet of paper.

Yes, this sounds like a lot of work for a paragraph. But it really isn't that difficult -- remember that you're just writing for yourself right now, so you don't need to deal with all of the anxieties that normally accompany writing. If you spell stuff wrong at this point, it won't matter at all.

The whole goal is to end up with a very clear picture in your head of why you want to join this group. Once you have that clear idea in your mind, writing the paragraph will be a snap -- you'll just tell them why you want to join. Your resulting paragraph will sound natural and deep, because it will be.

Answer 4

Instead of visiting hundreds of confusing sites, If you need help writing a paragraph, you should first make a list of information about the "Light Brigrade"... like what it is about, what its purpose is, what makes you interested in it, etc.
A list like this would do the trick;

Light Brigade offers:
Interesting things about it:
Purpose:
How my joining will help myself:
How my joining will help others:

Then you can begin turning your list into a paragraph. So, for example you could say, " The Light Brigade seems to be an enriching experience, a club with real values, which explains why I am interested in joining. Todays society is full of teens who are addicted to drugs and alcohol and need to be helped." ect. To me, that seems like a great introduction for an amazing paragraph on joining.
You don't need to visit thousands of sties to write a paragraph. You do, however, have to focus on the purpose of the paragraph.

Answer 5

my step-mom is an english teacher and I'm in all avanced crap so I should be god at this. Well you probably know how to set up a paragraph. Use interesting words, Try not to nrag about stuff you have done related to this, write a least one page. Some ideas on why (in my opinion0 iclude:
1.want to keep children safe
2. help your community
3. be a good role model
4. support others
5.reduce the amount of children wanting to try drugs/alchol because they think it's cool, or whatevr. peerpressure curiosity
6, reduce the chances of people dieing from liver problems, lung cancer, health problems in general.


You may also want to include good qualities about yourself. Example: speaking skills ( public speaking), responcible, generous, good listener, kind, good with children of all ages, ect.

remember to restate the intro. in the conclusion!

hope this was the kind of help you needed
good luck hope you get in!

Answer 6

Hi Jess,
How about something like,

Drugs and alcohol are having a seriously bad effect
on my school, my friends, and colleagues. Light Brigade
is a group I would be honored to become a member of,
so that I can effectively help with the limitation of use and eventually the prevention all together of the use of drugs and alcohol.

Good luck! and great cause!

Answer 7

Never heard of it we dont have them here.

Answer 8

study hard do right thing