Just remove the word "however" like so:
Ultima is a firm believer in tolerance and understanding and she teaches Antonio that different belief systems can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world.
2006-09-05 08:25:01
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answered by Drowningbluestars 4
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Ultima, a firm believer in tolerance and understanding, teaches Antonio that different belief systems can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world.
2006-09-05 13:20:54
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answered by violetb 5
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Ultima, who is a firm believer in tolerance and understanding, teaches Antonio that different belief systems offer valid ways of understanding the world.
2006-09-05 08:29:42
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answered by Anonymous
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Ultima, a firm believer in tolerance and understanding, teaches Antonio that different belief systems can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world.
2006-09-05 08:29:28
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answered by Turak 3
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How about this: Ultima, being a firm believer in tolerance and understanding teaches Antonio that there are different belief systems that can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world.
Not changed but a bit less wordy maybe??
2006-09-05 08:28:20
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answered by Anonymous
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Ultima, a firm believer in tolerance and understanding, teaches Antonio that different belief systems can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world.
2006-09-05 08:27:19
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answered by Oz 7
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However, Ultima is a firm believer in tolerance and understanding, so she teaches Antonio that different belief systems can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world.
2006-09-05 08:26:31
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answered by thegirlwholovedbrains 6
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Ultima, a firm believer in tolerance and understanding, teaches Antonio that different belief systems can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world.
2006-09-05 08:26:15
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answered by Mikey D 3
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Ultima is a firm believer in tolerance and understanding. She teaches Antonio that different belief systems can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world.
2006-09-05 08:25:30
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answered by Anonymous
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Ultima is a firm believer in tolerance and understanding and she eventually teaches Antonio that different belief systems can offer equally valid ways of understanding the world to his own.
2006-09-05 08:25:13
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answered by apostate03 3
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