what dose everyone thing of this unfishisned poem
to my secret velintine
from your lovely susnshine
i know am not as smart as Einstine
but im still your sunshine
i should have love you more in time
but instead i drink summer wine gasping in the sunshine
i clambed the masculine pine and dreamed of my sweet sunshine and are secret velintine
your mine mine in the sweet rays of sunshine
your as sweet as turpentine from a masculine pine
i wish you were mine so we could make love in the sunshine
how do i edited it to a poem from and anyone would like to add on to all my mis sakes go head hit me
2006-09-05 07:55:34 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I think it is lame, so to answer your question, no. PS: Learn how to spell.
2006-09-05 07:57:51 · answer #1 · answered by Ryan T 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, the spelling distracted me so much that I couldn't really read your poem to critique it.
2006-09-05 15:44:49 · answer #2 · answered by guitar4peace 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Spell check function can be your friend..... let it help you for gods sake.
2006-09-05 14:58:19 · answer #3 · answered by uranium9v 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aww..its sweet, im sure your valentine would love it. hehe. :)
2006-09-05 14:58:16 · answer #4 · answered by Jaded 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its interesting :)
2006-09-05 14:58:13 · answer #5 · answered by bury me in memory 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋