I just wrote a song tell me what do you think about it?

Question

We where on a Bar, me and my old Buddy Roger " Franck" Puda from www.peripherique.org and some drunk guy was seeking problem with us , so i wrotev a song about it .. be honnest i can handle critics ...

Well it's one for the money, two for the show
Three to get ready, now go cat go

But don't you step on my blue suede shoes
You can do anything but lay off of my blue suede shoes.

Well you can knock me down, step in my face
Slander my name all over the place
Do anything that you want to do but lay off of my shoes

And don't you step on my blue suede shoes
You can do anything but lay off of my blue suede shoes

Well blue, blue, blue suede shoes
Blue, blue, blue suede shoes
Blue, blue, blue suede shoes
Blue, blue, blue suede shoes
You can do anything but stay off of my blue suede, play it again

Blue, blue, blue suede shoes
Blue, blue, blue suede shoes
Blue, blue, blue suede
You can do anything but stay off of my blue suede shoes.


Blue Suede Shoes
Carl Perkins

Well it's a [A] one for t

for you ... its carl perkins who wrote elvis only sings

Answer 1

Awww, I don't know...

I don't think anybody's gonna like this song ;-)

Answer 2

Unless Elvis never died and you are he (or whoever wrote this song for him) , i think they call this plagiarism and really, blue suede shoes are so 1950s

Answer 3

this is SUCH a coincedence. did you know that a guy called ELVIS PRESLEY wrote the exact same song 50 years ago. Great minds think alike, eh?

Answer 4

Isn't that the song by Elvis?

Answer 5

nice number, but too many reps sound like beatles..... we all live in the yellow submarine.....

Answer 6

If this is really your song, it's great...

Answer 7

GOOD WORK . SHOULD BE A HIT . HAS A FAMILIAR RING ABOUT IT.