SINCE ORIENATATION ALL MY ATTENTION HAS BEEN DRWN TO YOU
u CAUGHT MY EYE AND MY HEART
I WANT TO KNOW U MORE SO I CAN LUV U MORE
PLZ DONT LAUGH AT THIS CUZ WHAT I FEEL IS REAL
2006-09-04 15:20:43 · 24 answers · asked by mcrpunkette99 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I JUST WROTE WHILE I WAS HELPIN A FRIEND WRITE A LUV NOTE
2006-09-04 15:21:32 · update #1
i think it is really good...but, the ...luv u more... thing is a little intense, don't you think? it kind of sounds like all your friend wants is, you know, it....but, other than that...it was really good...actuallly never mind...all of it was great
2006-09-04 15:25:55 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Delete the "PLZ DONT LAUGH AT THIS " because, if you note that they would probabely laugh at it. Maybe you should go for a simple note (avoinding the risk of overdoing it); which leaves more mystery to it. I would say; just jot down the first sentence.
2006-09-04 15:24:11 · answer #2 · answered by Ankhesenamun 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, yeah, I've heard all that before. That's what all you women say at the start. But I know what you're after, it's all girls ever think about, and when you've had your way it'll be off to the fabric store so you can brag to your friends. Well listen to this; you can have me this one last time, but no more . . . and I really mean it this time.
2006-09-04 15:35:30 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice.
2006-09-04 20:38:50 · answer #4 · answered by Anry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cut out the "I want to know you more so I can love you more". That's a little creepy. Don't mention love.
2006-09-04 15:23:07 · answer #5 · answered by BAnne 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Heavy.
2006-09-04 15:23:12 · answer #6 · answered by *Larry P. he's for me* 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's really.. cheesy.
the line "i want to know u more so i can luv u more" is a bit.. creepy.
2006-09-04 15:24:32 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
really no offence, but i think you could do better. i like the second line, if i were you i would build around that kind of mysterious metaphorical stuff. its catchy.
cheers
2006-09-04 15:23:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok wen u answered my q, u said that emos are different. They r actually 4 the popular kids, so don't tell lies u poser
2006-09-07 09:42:17 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Corny.
2006-09-04 15:22:40 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋