2006-09-04 09:37:54 · 4 answers · asked by victoriaelaine2004 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
I don't think so. An English paper is judged on the understanding of the material as well as how that information is presented. Unless a familiar tone underscores a theme of the paper, I would stick with more formal writing.
2006-09-04 09:43:23 · answer #1 · answered by ratboy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i don't care concerning to the factors. What i honestly care approximately is which you... ---get rid of the observe "you" and ANY variety thereof ("your self"). The essay isn't approximately me. ---get rid of the observe "life" (or a minimum of only about all of them). each and every thing is "in life." additionally... ---The observe "classes" looks too many circumstances. i finished counting at 5; it may look no greater beneficial than once or twice. comparable is going for the observe "adventure." ---you employ semicolons incorrectly some circumstances. enable ME EMPHASIZE that this paper has life and voice; this is readable and enticing. besides the reality that, using subject concerns above, this could't be an "A" and probable not a "B" once you're in a school-prep English type. in case you will like greater help, touch me.
2016-10-01 07:39:40 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
whats a familiar tone????
2006-09-04 09:42:48 · answer #3 · answered by Evelyn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no, in english it's supposed to be formal
2006-09-04 09:43:14 · answer #4 · answered by C_Millionaire 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋