i jsut wrote thys about a uy i like....
from the first day i met you i fell in love
now all these girls like you i thought i was the only one
people say we flirt but maybe it is just a game
if we start dating then we break up
i hope our love can stay the same
i have more but im not inished with it yet
2006-09-04 07:39:51 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
finished******
2006-09-04 07:40:06 · update #1
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2006-09-04 07:41:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its good!
i would do it like this though-
from the first day i met you i fell in love,
now all the girls like you, but i wanna be above
people say we flirt but its just a game
if we started dating it wouldnt be the same
i hope youre love life will always work out
i will miss you and wish that we had went out
but i know not to tempt fate
maybe someday we can date!
---let me know and you can use some of it if you want!! lol
2006-09-04 07:46:22 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, you´re good, i like how you write it exactly how it is. I love the honesty in your lyrics. Keep up the good work...and hey i hope everythin works out for you and this guy you like. :)
2006-09-04 07:43:11 · answer #3 · answered by Jaded 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good..u culd improve just a little more...try lol..u can do this!! cheer up !
2006-09-04 07:46:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice, keep up the good work
2006-09-04 08:34:59 · answer #5 · answered by Jubei 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's ookay....but i'm sure you could make it a lot better if you tried.
2006-09-04 07:45:32 · answer #6 · answered by Robyn Campos 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋