I have to do an essay on "Smoking Regulations" and I need help with coming up with a better thesis than what I have so far. Right now I have " Smoking Regulations are out of control". Anyone have a better idea?
2006-09-04 03:34:01 · 4 answers · asked by Trisha 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Although many anti-smoking regulations are made in order to protect people from second-hand smoke, the same regulations impenge on the rights of smokers.
2006-09-04 03:55:35 · answer #1 · answered by DanaElayne 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Expand on the idea, why are they out of control? What is causing them to be out of control? Smoking regulations are out of control because of a,b and c. Also, you might want to avoid the phrase "out of control". Use something that sounds more professional.
2006-09-04 10:42:20 · answer #2 · answered by robbet03 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your thesis should also state your "theory" or what your main argument is. (I'm assuming you are writing a persuasive/argumentative essay??) Your thesis just needs beefing up. Are you against the trends of smoking regulations or is it the inconsistency that you are writing about??
2006-09-04 10:41:36 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I dunno, that sounds pretty good to me. but ok. ill try. "People all over the world are dying, why? Because of the ridiculous smoking regulations."
2006-09-04 10:39:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋