Is this song good?

Question

Back Of my Head- Ashlyn

In the back of my head,
I say,
You aren’t my love,
In the back of my mind,
I hope and dream some one will come around,
And its you,
Not a dream not a wish,
Not a fear can ever change that,
but I know,
You aren’t my love,
I dread the thought that it’ll take years,
Till’ I’ll see that face,
That I’ll love till the end,
I can’t wait,
Any longer,
I want love,
I want dreams,
I want everything,
But in the back of my head,
I know you aren’t my love,
Stare at you face for hours,
Just imagining,
That day,
Maybe this is more than a crush,
Par say,
But I’m sinking,
And I’m feeling very mad,
And I’m shrinking,
From confident to nothing but a leaf in the wind,
Why does my mind?
Play tricks on me,
Saying it’s a sign,
Why do you cry to me?
And say we’re meant to be,
Forever and true,
As the words that I speak,
Straight to you,
Because the back of my head,
Back of my head,
Is saying,
You aren’t my love,
In the back of my head

Because everyone one is asking i wrote this song, and you can tell cuz it says by AShlyn, and my name is AShlyn!!!!1

Answer 1

Did you write it?

Well, regardless, I think it can relate to a lot of people. I like the rhyming. Nice song, do you have a melody?

Answer 2

though it seems good,
it has the feeling
the honey droping in the ear,
the words are soothing , provoking a pain in the heart,
feeling ,a fresh oppurtunity to de ja vu
bohemian
but in the back of my head ,
is saying ,
You aren't the writer
in the back of my head

Answer 3

nice.if this song is urs then iwill say u have a good thinking mind.please continue

Answer 4

its so cool I honesty loved it could you ask more of these questions so that I could read what you write ?

Answer 5

lovely lyrics....give romantic, slow-going music to it

Answer 6

awsome

Answer 7

good song,now do something with it.

Answer 8

that's pretty good. . . if you wrote it, nice job!!!

Answer 9

not bad, not bad at all!! did you write it?