Can you please identify grammatical mistakes in the following sentences?
TechAges is a customer focused software house in Pakistan delivering high quality added software solutions within a short time frame of 15 to 20 weeks. TechAges has a long list of successfully delivered software solutions for several clients in Europe and Pakistan in diversified business domains.
TechAges aligns itself with modern and advanced concepts in IT industry to help its customers (businessmen and entrepreneurs) by providing value added software. TechAges performs thorough research on each given problem and advises its customers on how their business growth aims can be achieved by the implementation of a specific and research-based software solution.
At TechAges, we also promote and sponsor the development of unique website ideas which could be turned into self revenue-generating websites.
2006-09-04 02:31:09 · 10 answers · asked by Danny 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
In three paragraphs, you have managed to say nothing. The consumer really wouldn't know what you were talking about in the is article. Second paragraph-I would use executives instead of businessmen. (women). Third paragraph, I would replace which with that. Article needs some work.
2006-09-04 02:38:55 · answer #1 · answered by violetb 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
TechAges is a customer focused software house, in Pakistan, delivering
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TechAges has a long list of successfully delivered software solutions for several
clients, in Europe and Pakistan, in diversified business domains.
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TechAges aligns itself with modern and advanced concepts in IT industry to help its
customers, (businessmen and entrepreneurs),
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When the main thought of a sentence contains an interjection, commas are used.
The sentence can be continued without the interjection, but it further explains and clarifies the thought.
2006-09-04 02:56:27 · answer #2 · answered by ed 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Reporting You
2006-09-04 02:37:13 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Marcy and the hot band ROSES's vocalist, Francy, took pictures mutually and also you'll see THEM interior the subsequent "New voices" mag on sale 6 nov. 2011." earlier the sentence change into very passive yet now that's more beneficial lively.
2016-10-15 22:56:56 · answer #4 · answered by kenton 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Blah blah blah blah boring.
2006-09-04 02:33:06 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
i dont think there are any mistakes
2006-09-04 02:41:31 · answer #6 · answered by xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can't see any.
2006-09-04 02:34:54 · answer #7 · answered by HoneyBearCub 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I AM REPORTING YOU HERE AGAIN.
2006-09-04 02:36:01 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Please disregard Edward. He doesn't know anything about commas!
2006-09-04 06:27:25 · answer #9 · answered by keepsondancing 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's ok!!
2006-09-04 02:36:33 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋