We spoke,
A connection,
Our lives changed forever.
Who am I?
Our eyes met,
We smiled,
Our souls met.
Who am I?
Walked together
Beside each other,
Promised to do that forever,
Who am I?
I love you.
The words were out,
The fall was great.
Who am I?
Oceans between us,
Not that great a distance,
Stronger than ever.
Who am I?
Goodbye,
The words were out,
The heartbreak stung,
Who am I?
Separate ways,
Separate paths,
Separate hearts,
Who am I?
First love,
That’s me,
Don’t pretend, don’t forget.
Who am I?
2006-09-04 01:21:05 · 16 answers · asked by sacred_90 2 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
Solid, real good
2006-09-04 01:23:17 · answer #1 · answered by X's Mommy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try www.teenink.com or poetry.com
This work is very good. You have a natural way with words.
Good Luck in the future - I think you can get published.
:) Adelaide
2006-09-04 09:34:51 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very touching, speaks to the soul. Keep writing.
2006-09-04 08:26:31 · answer #3 · answered by elgil 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You should submit that into a poetry contest. Along with any other great ones you have created.
2006-09-04 13:11:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful, powerful and creative. You have some talent!!
2006-09-04 08:30:41 · answer #5 · answered by Mariah&Lydias_Mom 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great! I loved it!
2006-09-04 08:30:08 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice.
2006-09-04 08:59:57 · answer #7 · answered by Stephanie F 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it's really good...u don't need opinions from us online;screw those who say it sux, they r jealous uv ur talent
2006-09-04 08:44:50 · answer #8 · answered by [dANiiE♥♫]™ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't want to burst your bubble or anything, it just doesn't grab me.
2006-09-04 08:24:57 · answer #9 · answered by Diablo 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
someone around here is veryyy talented!
2006-09-04 09:33:35 · answer #10 · answered by hottie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋