Mine.
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10 points to the person who posts the most pertinent comment on the journal.
MEANING, someone who leaves a decent comment.
2006-09-03 20:32:44 · 4 answers · asked by AxisofOddity 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
To read your journal made me very sad. You seem to have some trouble in your life. Did I understand correctly that you are away from your parents a lot?
You have potential as a poet. The best critique I can give is that you get distracted at times in your poetry.
The poem around the middle of the page has a last line that seems "drifted" away from the main thought. To fix this, I would suggest reading your poems as though they were someone else's work before calling it a final copy.
2006-09-03 21:47:17 · answer #1 · answered by kitkat94670 4 · 3⤊ 0⤋
It is your inner thoughts. It is your view. I can neither agree or disagree but accept it that this is you. You are going through a phase in your life. Everyone passes through this path at one time or another. This is what makes you, you.
You have to try to know yourself, which it seems like you are still searching in your journal. So the earlier you can find yourself in this meaning of life will you find contentment in yourself. No one can tell you how, we can just guide. Ultimately you have to make your own decisions.
Look around you. Nature in harmony is the best way to learn your purpose in life. After all, we were part of nature from the start.
2006-09-04 06:22:48 · answer #2 · answered by peanutz 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When I read your journal, I thought I was reading a story, but it ended to quick. You're a good writer.
2006-09-04 04:30:30 · answer #3 · answered by Ray 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats what she said.... lol
2006-09-04 03:35:14 · answer #4 · answered by me 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋