I feel like this sentence is very sucked. It is long, and not looking good.
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Other possible solutions were that Cisco could have a reward system for employees who didn't drive, or put campus shuttles near the Bart stations or Caltrain stations that would take the employees directly to the site.
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2006-09-03 18:58:24 · 5 answers · asked by BBMak 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Other possible solutions for Cisco were to reward employees who used public transport or to arrange for campus shuttles to be at or near Bart or Caltrain stations to take the employees directly to the site.
2006-09-03 19:05:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 1⤋
Another possible solution was that Cisco could have a reward system for those who didn't drive.
Campus shuttles could also be placed near the Bart or Caltrain stations so that non-driving employees could be taken directly to the site.
2006-09-04 02:03:12 · answer #2 · answered by Bunnyz C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a run on sentace try this:
Other possible solutions were that Cisco could have a reward system for the employees who did not drive. They could have also put campus shuttles near the Bart stations or Caltrain stations that would take the employees directly to the site.
your basically just needed to make it two sentaces.
2006-09-04 02:03:40 · answer #3 · answered by Syd 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, there is a lot of bad advice on this one. I wish people wouldn't offer advice on things they obviously have no idea about.
familymember- you don't number items in a professional paper.
Sunny- Same goes for you, you would never see that in a professional journal.
Syd- Your effort to break up the run-on sentence resulted in to incorrect sentences.
Don't worry about it being a "run-on" sentence, this is obviously not kindergarten writing.
"Cisco's other possible solutions included instituting a reward system for employees who didn't drive, and placing campus shuttles near the bart stations or Caltrain stations to transport employees directly to the site."
An "organizing" project perhaps?
2006-09-04 03:48:53 · answer #4 · answered by allforasia 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
there were other possible solutions
they were
1.Cisco could reward those who did not drive
2.Cisco could arrange for a shuttle to take the employees from
Bart station and caltrain station
2006-09-04 02:02:11 · answer #5 · answered by raj 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋