A beautiful teen,
no place to go,
She sold a gift,
That she didn't know.
Every night,
That special gift,
Was filled with hatred,
Filled with sh*t.
And though it kept her,
Housed and fed,
she didn't know,
that gift was dead.
And when that teen
was dead and burried,
the mark she left
Was dark and heavy.
A beautiful teen,
no place to go,
who sold a gift,
she didn't know.
2006-09-03 15:54:00 · 14 answers · asked by . 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Yes, because of shalllowness, she did not understand what is really important. She focused on her beauty, and not what was on the inside. The inside was forgotten, left open, until it was filled with things unrecognizable. Her soul began to rot, and then the beauty withered on the vine.
Yes, you have talent.
A poem should invoke an emotion.
A poem should offer some new insight.
You have accomplished this.
Please begin again for the search of truth.
You must step out of the fast lane that life and the new society has made for you, of instant gratification by flippling a switch or taking a pill, and slow down and begin to study the problems facing you in order to understand. You must understand your purpose and meaning in life in order to experience the fullness of joy and happiness that this life offeres.
There is no one "answer." There is no switch. There is no pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. You cannot simply decide to be happy any more than you can decide to be rich. It takes some action from you.
You are looking for answers, but through the fog of pain, don't accept just any answer. You are searching for truth. Concentrate on verification and analysis of truth, then confirmation, and build a foundation of truth from which all answers spring eternal.
I have found many people searching for truth. It is indeed difficult to find in today's world. Everything seems to be instant gratification without truth or morals, but rather whatever people want it to be. You can choose confusion, or you can choose truth.
So many people have the same problems, by not determining truth first, that I started a website. Actually, it began when I found out the truth about Federal Gov't, so that is the focus of the website, but not your focus .
When you go there to the website, along the left side near the bottom, click on "Articles."
From the Articles-Contents page, click on "Essay." This will explain to you about truth and its importance in your life. It is rather long, about six pages, so it would be better to print it and sit down in your easy chair so you can concentrate.
When you are done with the Essay, then read the article titled "Finding Truth."
2006-09-03 16:57:32 · answer #1 · answered by dredude52 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow ... how sad. So many teens are in that place of the gift they did not know they had! I like it. FLOWER >> the gift is her body. read it again and you will get it. she is selling herself on the streets, because she has no place to go, she has no idea who she is and neither does anyone else.
2006-09-03 23:01:04 · answer #2 · answered by Jacqueline D 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm trying to figure out the gift, but the theme is melancholic.
2006-09-03 23:02:06 · answer #3 · answered by peace m 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very dark but very beautiful.
2006-09-03 22:57:12 · answer #4 · answered by kymberly_smith 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a lacuna coil-type song.
2006-09-03 23:00:51 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice try. Don't give up your day job.
2006-09-03 22:58:11 · answer #6 · answered by yahoohoo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Heavy, baby, heavy.
2006-09-03 22:56:59 · answer #7 · answered by stick man 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it really dark but i like it
2006-09-03 23:16:26 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds like a death wish
2006-09-03 23:34:29 · answer #9 · answered by .................................... 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your poem. What I feel about your poem is that something is on your mind. Ask another question, please.
2006-09-03 23:13:37 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋