ok im writing a pome and im doing it on death (dont ask) if you were going to die soon what would you do? what would be your last words, your last request? like you had cancer or something?
im trying to make a pome that isnt about like random stuff i want to make people think. so i need help.
2006-09-03 11:11:46 · 5 answers · asked by im_a_roxstar 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Sure thing. I'll work on one.
Ok, it's not my best work, but I hope you like it:
As I lie here dying,
I think about my life.
Did I spend it helpfully?
Or causing people strife?
I think of all the years gone by
And wish I still had more.
But I know I’ll be dying soon,
I don’t know what’s in store.
My family surrounds me,
Tears upon their face.
Then suddenly they all back up
To give me some more space.
And as I take my final breath,
And hear my dying bell,
I hope to God my life was good,
I hope I lived it well.
2006-09-03 11:13:18 · answer #1 · answered by Hearts to You 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Here's what a pome means to me. The characteristic fruit of the apple family, as an apple, pear, or quince, in which the edible flesh arises from the greatly swollen receptacle and not from the carpels
2006-09-03 18:14:39 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i'd write it along the lines on the things i needed to still do, the people i needed to tell i loved and maybe past happy memories, some maybe from childhood
2006-09-03 18:13:39 · answer #3 · answered by Coxie Megan 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
go to poerty.com
its amazing.
there is helping with rhyming and everything..
good luck
2006-09-03 18:13:53 · answer #4 · answered by kittylover61891 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
here's your tip: it's spelled "poem".
you're welcome.
2006-09-03 18:13:05 · answer #5 · answered by Oliver Kloz-Hoff 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋