This is a section of a flyer and it is for a house cleaning sevice. I want to know what it sounds like to you. I am thinking of saying something like this. "My services include weekly, Bi-weeekly, special events, move-in, and move-outs and accepting four more continuing clients call now to schedule an appointment."
2006-09-03 09:09:59 · 6 answers · asked by tvalverde907 1 in Business & Finance ➔ Advertising & Marketing
It sounds pretty good. I mean, I read it and I know what your company offers at a glance. I would maybe word it a little differently, but not much. Ex: "My services include weekly and bi-weekle cleanings, move-ins and move-outs, and special events. We are currently accepting continuing clients, slots are limited so call now to schedule an appointment." Just a suggestion, but it sounds good the way you currently have it, too.
Good luck!
2006-09-03 09:20:52 · answer #1 · answered by raecheile 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it sounds good but I would remove the part about accepting four more clients. After all if you add a few that are weekly or biweekly you will still have plenty of room for the odd contact who just needs a one time service.
2006-09-03 10:06:48 · answer #2 · answered by WitchTwo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
People DON'T care about your company...
They care about a solution to their problems for example more time to go to the gym...no cleaning hassles etc!
On you flyer you NEED to emphasize that.
People don't care whether you do weekly or bi-weekly they just want someone to take care of their problem so they can get onto doing something they ENJOY!
You are not in the CLEANING business you are in the PEACE OF MIND business!
2006-09-03 13:51:39 · answer #3 · answered by d&N 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
try this
services available
daily, weekly
one time jobs,
moving services,
include packing and unpacking
cleaning with your needs in mind
2006-09-03 11:11:53 · answer #4 · answered by walterknowsall 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you need to shorten your flyer. Just put, " Reputable home cleaner looking to add only 4 more clients. Call .............."
This makes it seem like, "Shoot, I had better call before she doesn't have a spot left."
2006-09-03 09:16:06 · answer #5 · answered by Richard B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Perhaps be more specific about how extensive your service is.
2006-09-03 09:17:13 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋