thanks for you opinion!!!
"mommy"
My role model is Barbie
I’m your artificial hottie
With a diet-pill body
I like to flip my bleached hair
And pull down my shades
‘cause trust me, I know what’s in the mirror
I’m nice yet fast paced
I like cool cars and a pretty face
I’m equipped with daddy’s credit card
And a Gucci bag
What’s your name? Wait, I don’t care
Just finish my nails
And then start on my hair
I want to look just like her
On the magazine cover of Allure
I have my surgeon on speed dial
My dog is the error, and now the trial
An artificial life lived in accepted denial
So while I strut my stuff in the latest style
Ill be sure to look your way and…
Give you my most innocent smile…
i was kinda going for a chik version of nickleback's rockstar
2006-09-03 08:06:38 · 14 answers · asked by me 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I honestly really like it!
I think you are talented. If you were to publish it someday, you would definitely have a large audience, because I feel that the listener can relate to the lyrics.
Keep up the good work and good luck!!
PS: Can't wait to hear it on the radio! ;)
2006-09-03 08:11:01 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ mss116 ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, that is not what Simone or Simon would say....
However-her is my critic marks:
Interesting song lyrics, a little degrading but with that aside here goes.
1. Mommy? I hope thats not the title.
2. Take out the word "lived" in....an artificial life lived in accepted denial. Make it an artificial life in accepted denial, so it doesnt turn into a tongue twister.
3. Also the word "just", just doesnt fit there smoothly. MAke it...I want to look like her on the cover of allure
Other than that...it is perfect. DO you have the music too? Good Luck
2006-09-03 15:25:39 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
These lyrics are great for Paris Hilton.
2006-09-03 15:11:41 · answer #3 · answered by Ocean 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I could see one of the "pop-tarts" singing it on MTV. As for me, it seems to Jessica/Brittney/Christina/Paris for me. I like Pink, Gwen Steffani, Joan Jett types. They wouldn't be caught dead singing a song like this. Just my opinion.
2006-09-03 15:11:05 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
it okay so you like to write songs i use to sing i tried to get in the music biss good luck :}
2006-09-03 15:09:22 · answer #5 · answered by wwefreak36 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hate music that makes women seem stupid and superficial. but its true with some , I like it
2006-09-03 15:08:45 · answer #6 · answered by wilowdreams 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds more like paris hilton on nickleodeon
2006-09-03 15:09:54 · answer #7 · answered by nodumgys 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Simone says YOU ARE THE WORST SONG WRITER IN THE WORLD
2006-09-03 15:09:00 · answer #8 · answered by amt2011 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Its ight...i can do better and im more into rap freestylin and stuff
2006-09-03 15:14:27 · answer #9 · answered by dirt_riderYZ250 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WoW
That is strange
2006-09-03 18:28:38 · answer #10 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋