whatcha think of my song???????????
In Doubt (of u and me)
Sometimes I feel like my life's a wonder
and sometimes i feel like im ten feet under
(bridge)
right now i feel confused depressed and hurt
like im falling
what is this worth?
what is this worth?
(chorus)
when u broke my heart what was that about?
u knew it was done from the start
but now my hearts in doubt
i wanna do something
but u ruined my life
this is the end of line
if u and me, baby
its like u knew it was me
calling ur phone
like u were ignoring me
or did u wanna be alone?
(bridge)
(chorus)
when u broke my heart(change keys of heart while lasting it a while)
(chorus)
(backup vocals) and now im empty,
i just dont get what i did wrong
(backup vocals) and now im empty,
i thought i could be strong
(speaks) i can do anything
thats it whatcha think?
PS~ i didnt copy this song off of ♥ HeartStolen ♥ because she is me!
thx for the time! i love u!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-09-02 22:22:53 · 22 answers · asked by .oh snap.london bridge.oh snap. 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Cute song.... what inspired you to write it?
2006-09-02 22:28:04 · answer #1 · answered by Nikki C 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Nice song
2006-09-02 22:28:30 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It'd be nice to hear the song otherwise its a poem, but I liked it. Too many people who post songs/poems are a little too long winded and wordy. I like yours.
2006-09-02 22:30:01 · answer #3 · answered by niwriffej 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good too know that poetry in music is still one of the best, if not the best form of expression.
i think it's fantastic, but i am gonna invalidate myself because i don't know how to write music.
but best wishes for all of your future songs.
i hope they take you down all the roads you want too travel if this is the calling your pursuing.
cheers
2006-09-02 22:29:29 · answer #4 · answered by lesdrake2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not a short Question but at least you having fun and that's what life should be all about.
Take care!
2006-09-02 22:25:37 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
As long as the music is rock !
2006-09-02 22:31:23 · answer #6 · answered by R G 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try singing it out and I may be able to comment further.
2006-09-02 22:30:58 · answer #7 · answered by Vile Maverick 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes I love you
2006-09-02 22:27:41 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sexie anything you do is all good to me baby
Luv ya!
Pickey
2006-09-02 22:56:44 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love you
2006-09-02 22:28:30 · answer #10 · answered by jr5594 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋