I am falling so far
Falling onto Mars
Yes Mars, the planet
I am falling for my beloved Janet
Why? You ask
Well to find my mask
U see
I cannot bee
without my mask
for it is my task
To find what i have lost
If i fail, then it will cost
Cost my love's life
Which will bring me such Strife
I love her will all my might
So much i am willing to fight
Fight for Janet
Who is my planet
Who is my world
....
i know it sucks but i still want to finish it. LOL
2006-09-02 09:38:51 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
furled is a word, it's like when you wrap a sail around the boom.
hurled might work, past tense of puke, lol
how about .. "a necklace to be pearled?"
"we met and my heart twirled"
luck!
2006-09-02 09:42:32 · answer #1 · answered by wrathofkublakhan 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
doesnt have to rhyme with world.. can as well rhyme with planet..
2006-09-02 09:45:10 · answer #2 · answered by Arwen 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
With her wood burled. With her hair curled. Her flag is unfurled. When she heard this bad poetry, she hurled. The walnut is knurled.
2006-09-02 10:59:39 · answer #3 · answered by miyuki & kyojin 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Furled, curled, hurled.
2006-09-02 09:47:01 · answer #4 · answered by notyou311 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
curled, hurled, swirled, twirled, whirled
type, "rhyming dictionary", into google.
2006-09-02 09:43:13 · answer #5 · answered by altgrave 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It doesn't suck ...no one can compare with this person ..
she is your world ..
.no rythym or rhyme ,,,,,
shes your world .
nothing can finish the poem .........
.you wouldn't want to cause she would be like anyone else..shes unique.....
your world !...............
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2006-09-02 09:48:09 · answer #6 · answered by cesare214 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
field
fooled
sealed
shield
revealed
2013-10-15 22:00:38 · answer #7 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
my heart she's hurled
...into a grip of love.
2006-09-02 09:46:14 · answer #8 · answered by Iris 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Uhm, how about "swirled" or "curled" or "hurled".....have fun!
2006-09-02 09:42:25 · answer #9 · answered by FiveStarAuthor 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hurled
2006-09-02 09:42:32 · answer #10 · answered by abracadabragal 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋