I have to write hello massage to my coworkers. But I'm not sure this gonna be ok or not. So I need a someone who can proof it.( English isn't my mother language though):
Hello everyone, My name is ___ and I'm originally from ___ area.
I had lived in ___ for a year. Recently I have been missing ___ so badly. I wish I could go back there.
But I am so honored to working at ___ company and all of you.
I am so exciting about working with you.
Carpe Diem !
2006-09-02 01:30:23 · 10 answers · asked by atboca30 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Hello, My name is ________. I originally am from__________. I have moved here from __________, where I had spent a year.
While I have times where I miss___________ , I am excited and honored to be working with all of you here at___________.
2006-09-02 01:36:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Hello everyone, My name is ___ and I'm originally from __________. I had been living in ___ for a year and I liked the place so for some time I have been missed ____ rather badly.
However, I am honored to be working with all of you at __________and I hope I'll be able make friends with you and get over my homesickness. I am so excited about working with you and will do my best to do the tasks as expected of me.
English is not my mother tongue so i hope you will excuse any shortcomings and guide me to do better
Thank you,
Yours sincerely
Carpe Diem !
2006-09-02 08:48:26 · answer #2 · answered by veeru_pahari 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hello everyone! My name is _ and Im originally from_ area. I have lived in _ for a year. Recently, I have been missing it very badly. I wish I could go back. But I am honored working at _ company with all of you. I am so excited to work with you.
Carpe Diem!
2006-09-02 08:40:54 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good. maybe a different use of punctuation to help it 'flow' a bit better....
Hello everyone! My name is_. I am originally from_, but have lived in _ for a year. As much as I enjoy it here, I do miss _ a lot, and sometimes wish I could go back. However, I am excited now to have this great opportunity working here at _. I am looking forward to meeting and working with all of you.
You can keep the Carpe Diem, and maybe a sincerely or thank you before adding your name to the bottom.
2006-09-02 08:43:45 · answer #4 · answered by girlnoladrea 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Hello everyone! My name is........ and I'm orginally from the.......... area. I lived there for a year & miss it lately that I wish I could go back there. However, I am so honored & excited to work in this company with all of you.
2006-09-02 08:39:48 · answer #5 · answered by Shot At Sight 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi. My name is ___, and I am originally from the ___ area. I have lived in ___ for one year. Recently, I have been missing ___, and I hope to go back for a visit soon.
It is an honor to be working at ___ company, and I am excited about working with each of you.
Have a great day!
2006-09-02 08:40:11 · answer #6 · answered by Nobody's Fool 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
but I m honoured working at ......company and are very excited to be with you all. Carpe Diem..
2006-09-02 08:43:54 · answer #7 · answered by abdul k 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For your next to last line.. just one word needs to be changed...
I am so excited about working with you.
The rest of it looks good.
2006-09-02 08:37:34 · answer #8 · answered by ♥Tom♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is correct but few minor mistekes are there
i am so honoured to work at....... company and with all of you
i am so excited to work with u
2006-09-02 08:37:27 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It will you who will know the answer cuz we don't know you.
2006-09-02 08:35:53 · answer #10 · answered by Ravi 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋