please coment on my work.
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Make'em sink in Smiths lake,
pull 'smith' on day siblings at day wake.
DIS is Sydney but, I will make it like Iraq
If you test me. I might, 1. check you and *** up your family too.
Mic check one two,
I'm dat physco dat be on da news,
Not movies,
being abused by troops and police.
Tha ones that didn't go to tha east,
I stay global but *** peace.
2006-09-01 11:26:43 · 8 answers · asked by The King 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Sorry, I love poetry, but I wouldn't call that poetry. More ganster rap. Poetry is the fruit of the soul. Yours is definately fruity, but it don't feed my soul.
2006-09-01 11:29:30 · answer #1 · answered by sarkyastic31 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Rap and poetry are kinda comparable. Rap has bypass and rhythm to boot. Rappers of previous college like 2Pac, Biggie, Ice cube, Run DMC, have been the actual poet. They enjoyed to make rhymes and flows. yet now days rappers in simple terms supply a **** approximately it.
2016-11-23 18:09:33 · answer #2 · answered by keeven 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like poetry, and while unfortunately this does qualify as such, I must agree that you should slap some mindless chorus on it and take it to a label.
2006-09-01 11:33:41 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I would say it is poetry. rap is poetry. You are making an expression. So for that reason I call it poetry.
2006-09-01 11:33:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Good, but it is much more like rap, not poetry
2006-09-01 11:45:24 · answer #5 · answered by Carlos A 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like poetry. Sadly, this ain't it.
2006-09-02 03:12:41 · answer #6 · answered by keepsondancing 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmm
2006-09-01 11:34:56 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
categorize this in trash.
2006-09-05 00:55:50 · answer #8 · answered by justthinkin 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋