The key is to put the main nouns/pronouns or main verbs, and the clauses the that describe them, as close together as possible to make it easier for others to follow. There are several ways to do this. You can rearrange the sentence using connective words that clearly demonstrate relationships, change tenses etc. Here are my solutions:
The farmer saw the flock of birds that damaged his crops flying over the oak tree.
The pants looked much more presentable after all of the wrinkles had bee ironed out.
On Monday afternoon, the police chief posted the mandate against hubcap theft.
2006-09-01 08:28:49
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answer #1
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answered by HoneyB 4
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Q: Can you help me correct these sentences that use dangling modifiers?
1. The farmer saw the flock of birds, flying over the oak tree, that had damaged his crops.
2. The pants looked much more presentable after ironing out all the wrinkles.
3. On Monday afternoon, the police chief posted the mandate against hubcap theft.
2006-09-01 08:49:27
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answer #2
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answered by Lawn Jockey 4
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1. The farmer saw the flock of birds that had been flying over the oak tree and damaging his crops.
2. Ironing out all wrinkles, the pants looked much more presentable.
3. On Monday afternoon the police chief posted the mandate against hubcap theft.
Maybe I got these right? Have no clue. good luck!
2006-09-01 08:33:38
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answer #3
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answered by ????? 7
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1. The farmer saw the flock of birds flying over the oak tree that had damaged his crops.
2. The pants looked much more presentable after all the wrinkles were ironed out .
3. On Monday afternoon the police chief posted the mandate against hubcap theft
2006-09-01 08:27:29
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answer #4
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answered by Will 4
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1. The farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops flying over the oak tree.
2. After having had all the wrinkles ironed out the pants looked much more presentable.
3. On Monday afternoon the police chief posted the mandate against hubcap theft.
Why do you guys always get other people to do your homework for you? How do you expect to learn anything?
2006-09-01 08:26:54
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answer #5
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answered by TweetyBird 7
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Dangling modifiers come out funny. The technique is rearranging or removing some words.
1. Who is flying, the farmer or the flock of birds? It's best to place the phrase "Flying over the oak tree" in the end of the sentence.
***The farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops flying over the oak tree. OR
***Flying over the oak tree, the flock of birds that had damaged the crops was seen by the farmer.
2. Who does the ironing?
***Ironing out all the wrinkles, Maria made the pants looked more presentable. = I also omitted much.
3. I think there's no problem here, only that the number came after the letter T.
2006-09-01 12:47:03
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answer #6
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answered by klay 3
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1.Flying over the oak tree, the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops.
The farmer saw, flying over the oak tree, the flock of birds that had damaged his crops.
2.Ironing out all wrinkles, the pants looked much more presentable.
Ironing out all wrinkles (made) the pants looked much more presentable
3.The police chief posted the mandate against hubcap theft on Monday afternoon
On Monday afternoon the police chief posted the mandate against hubcap theft
2006-09-01 08:47:01
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answer #7
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answered by emerald_trout 4
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the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops flying over the tree
2.after all wrinkles were ironed out the pant looked much more presentable
3.On Monday afternoon the police chief posted the mandate against the hubcap theft
2006-09-01 08:40:01
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answer #8
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answered by raj 7
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On Monday morning, the police chief posted the mandate against hubcap theft.
2006-09-01 08:31:05
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answer #9
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answered by Steve P 5
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1. After landing, the farmer went into his house to get his shot gun; he'd teach those birds a thing or two.
2. The pants were very proud of their work.
3. Monday Afternoon objected to being used as a bulletin board.
2006-09-01 08:29:46
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answer #10
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answered by David S 5
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