The knifes in my hand
right at my throat
ready to slice
and take away my fragile life
it aint worth it nemore
this life of pain and anger
1 hand movement and i wont care
sure everyone will weep
i weep also..
here i lay waiting to die
starving this body
here death comes
what ive been waiting for
wait..can you hear it?
the horror screams of a thousand dark nights
there they weep..all for me...
my body lay still
death is here
god..this is great
death is here
Freedom at last
dead i am dead
This is how i feel inside
My emotion gone except for the pain
Dead inside
See how i hide my death
Fake Fake Fake
2006-09-01 06:33:52 · 8 answers · asked by ~<3TwiztidHeart~<3 2 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
I wrote this poem when i wanted to die..i have truly died insade and no one seems to notice or care....I want to be alone and die..ive stopped eating...and everything
2006-09-01 06:49:19 · update #1
If you really wanted "it" then you would have, and then not been able to write this awesome poem. So I am glad you didn't and I think you should write more and then read them to people so they can see you as well. I can see this being read by you at a large group, and I can see the impact you can make on society for the immensity of your feelings and your apparent ability to express it so well. Good luck
2006-09-01 08:30:58 · answer #1 · answered by Scott 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If they are open to help, sure thing. It is a rare poet who could compose such a poem without personally feeling the emotions that go with it. Someone to talk to who esteems them, such as a counsellor, could make a difference.
2006-09-01 13:55:36 · answer #2 · answered by MBK 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it depends. why did this person write this poem? sometimes a poem is just to express your self when you cant say it. this person probally has some probs in thier life that they dont want to talk about. but you should ask them if they are ok. and just make sure that theyu know that you care about them. thats very important. good luck and god bless
2006-09-01 13:47:51 · answer #3 · answered by penguinxcrossing 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You do need help. You might have a chemical in-balance or you may have have too many stressors in life. Thinks may be bad now but nothing stays the same forever.
2006-09-01 14:10:28 · answer #4 · answered by metamorphosisa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the real question, does any one really like my poem , ego, your id is afraid of death .... fake , the people that gave you sympathy need help .
2006-09-02 05:47:17 · answer #5 · answered by Rick R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't know, but it's very sophisticated. Probably needs help though.
2006-09-01 13:49:14 · answer #6 · answered by EW 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I do think so, yes!
2006-09-01 13:47:17 · answer #7 · answered by Karin 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummmmmmmmm.....
2006-09-01 13:38:06 · answer #8 · answered by Ellyn 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋