Let me ask you a question,
So listen well,
I'll say it once,
So please don't tell.
(CHORUS) A guy like you, with a girl like me,
We're so different,
How can this be? (2x)
I can ask you again,
Right here, right now.
I can tell you more,
If you allow.
(CHORUS)
If you don't know,
I'd like to say,
I love you, boy,
More every day.
(CHORUS)
I may say truth,
I may say lie,
But I love you more,
Than the stars in the sky.
(CHORUS)
Your heart is pure,
My love is strong,
So maybe we,
Can get along.
(CHORUS 2x)
Do you like it? This is the first draft, so, I can tweak it a lot. I don't have any music for it.
2006-09-01 03:09:05 · 13 answers · asked by Peanut to the rescue! 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Anyway, most singers don't write their own lyrics.
2006-09-01 03:13:32 · update #1
It IS a bit dry, but it goes very well do the melody of that song that goes "all i want is to feel this way... the evening speaks.." Anyway, I have no one to love! *sob* ='(
2006-09-01 03:18:40 · update #2
I don't have a day job! I'm only ten!!
2006-09-01 03:19:24 · update #3
I have no clue if its joyful or solemn.
2006-09-01 03:23:48 · update #4
I've never written soongs, just poems.
2006-09-01 03:29:04 · update #5
I think it could be a love ballad, or a slow dance song.
2006-09-01 03:31:26 · update #6
Not bad at all. It should have a nice rocking music though.
2006-09-01 03:13:59 · answer #1 · answered by the_answerer 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's weird that you say you love the boy and then later you talk about getting along, like you are still meeting him.
Put the progression of the relationship in chronological order.
OR play loud, sing loud and wear clothes that will distract and if you play good stuff the sound will overcome.
The Beatles did OK with Obi-Di Obi-Dah!
2006-09-01 10:14:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a bit cliche I'm afraid. But you did better than I could! I'd agree it'd could make a decent dance/pop tune.
2006-09-01 10:15:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not the worst I've heard. It'd probably work well for like a dance song.
2006-09-01 10:11:32 · answer #4 · answered by every1lovesamixedgirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good song. Strong lyric and simple. I would say :
I may tell a lie.
2006-09-01 10:12:01 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very simple, i wish i can hear the tune so that i can appreciate more...is it a joyful song or a solemn one?
2006-09-01 10:19:35 · answer #6 · answered by sheikaella 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah i like it its really strong so maybe there could be some adjustments but the overall format is pretty good , good luck on it:)
2006-09-01 10:19:04 · answer #7 · answered by TWINKLESTAR 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aww you did really well here, thats really sweet!..
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2006-09-01 10:12:22 · answer #8 · answered by ListenToYourHeartBeat. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey that is a good song to start with
2006-09-01 10:14:30 · answer #9 · answered by devils_lil_angel_16_69 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's too simple...you leave nothing to think about. Sorry...but you did ask.
2006-09-01 10:11:54 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋