I like to write poetry. but, from time to time, I run into a huge lack of inspiration. luckily for me, this time it is only the title that gives me problems. read the following poem and give a suitable title, if you please.
I’ve been blessed…
For such a sweet sight
Would make even
An angel’s delight.
An angel, however,
You are not…
For an angel
Is not easily forgot…
You are but
A rose of dust…
A wingless dove…
A soul of rust…
Yet, underneath,
Lies a light unseen
And a soul that’s not tarnished,
But of bright green…
2006-08-31 08:50:17 · 11 answers · asked by toma_calin86 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Mi ángel de polvo, it means my angel of dust.
2006-08-31 08:54:41 · answer #1 · answered by Leonor 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
What a beautiful poem. I love writing poetry and have the same problem as you, I often lack inspiration. I also have problems with titles. BTW, I am sorry to burst your bubble about the past answer, about entering your poetry at www.poetry.com. I had actually entered my poem to this site, but as it turns out, it's all a scam. They send letters to everyone who writes poems for their site, and often, your poems aren't even in their book. I know because of experience. Kinda sucks, but I'm sure I will be able to get my poems published in the future. Good luck to you too!
2006-08-31 20:23:34 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
For my own poetry, I try to go for something implied or even specifically said in the poem. For yours, could I suggest "Angel's Delight" or "Angel Dust," perhaps? "Rose of Dust" and "Soul of Rust" sound nice as well.
2006-08-31 16:20:47 · answer #3 · answered by anything_but_this_again 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good work! I write poetry on poetry.com and I have the same problem of coming up with titles. Try poetry.com for a chance to win money for your work.
2006-08-31 16:09:22 · answer #4 · answered by lindsay_brks 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Soul Unseen
beautiful poem...I'm a published poet, keep writing.
2006-08-31 15:59:38 · answer #5 · answered by Julie W 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was pretty good. 9 out of 10. It was A LOT better than what I try to do. Keep it up :)
2006-08-31 15:57:18 · answer #6 · answered by Not a Nazi 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Backward turn backward O time in your flight
Make me a child
Just for tonight
2006-08-31 15:52:53 · answer #7 · answered by Zsoka 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Being young again I truly miss but if I was your age I would give you a kiss.
2006-08-31 15:57:53 · answer #8 · answered by goodbye 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Transparent in my Eyes
2006-08-31 20:54:38 · answer #9 · answered by juncogirl3 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Even angels die. or I also like What was what is.
2006-08-31 15:59:49 · answer #10 · answered by Casca 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋